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authorTeddy Wing2015-10-04 22:23:17 -0400
committerTeddy Wing2015-10-04 22:23:17 -0400
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doc/space_vlaze.txt: Change backstore to be more upbeat
Change the backstory based on my Dad's recommendation that the enemy ships should be popcorn kernels. This makes the story more fun and weird and pacifistic. Another possible idea from my conversation with my parents is that the kernels could pop into popcorn when you hit them, and this would turn them into collectibles. Let's see if I have time to make that work.
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INTRODUCTION
Captain Nolan and his crew on the Benten have completed a routine delivery
-mission to Chapek 9. As they make their way home through the Wind system,
-their ship is suddenly assailed by kamikaze space aliens! Help Nolan and the
-Benten destroy the enemy drone ships before it's too late.
+mission to Chapek 9. As they make their way home through the Maze system,
+their ship is suddenly assailed by giant floating popcorn kernels! Help Nolan
+and the Benten pop the kernels before it's too late.