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diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index ca3fffe04..1b7ce6929 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ <li> <div class="group row"> <div class="col-1"> - <p>Homebrew installs packages into their own isolated prefix and then symlinks everything into <code>/usr/local</code>.</p> + <p>Packages are installed into their own isolated prefixes and then symlinked into <code>/usr/local</code>.</p> </div> <div class="col-2"> <pre><code><span style="color: #e3d796;">$</span> cd /usr/local @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ bin/wget -> ../Cellar/wget/1.12/bin/wget</code></pre> <li> <div class="group row"> <div class="col-1"> - <p>Homebrew is self-contained and unintrusive. </p> + <p>Just extract the tarball and straight away you have a working Homebrew installation. </p> </div> <div class="col-2"> <p class="button"><a href="http://wiki.github.com/mxcl/homebrew/installation">Install Homebrew Today!</a></p> @@ -59,18 +59,18 @@ bin/wget -> ../Cellar/wget/1.12/bin/wget</code></pre> <li> <div class="group row"> <div class="col-1"> - <p>Create your own Homebrew packages in seconds.</p> + <p>Create new Homebrew packages in seconds.</p> </div> <div class="col-2"> <pre><code><span style="color: #e3d796;">$</span> brew create http://foo.com/bar-1.0.tgz -Created /usr/local/Library/Formula/foo.rb</code></pre> +Created /usr/local/Library/Formula/bar.rb</code></pre> </div> </div> </li> <li> <div class="group row"> <div class="col-1"> - <p>Homebrew has a Git foundation, so enjoy version control on your brewing customizations and easily merge upstream updates. </p> + <p>Easily adapt Homebrew formula to your needs. And since it's all Git underneath your changes are merged automatically with upstream updates.</p> </div> <div class="col-2"> <pre><code><span style="color: #e3d796;">$</span> brew edit wget <span style="color: #666;"># opens in TextMate!</span></code></pre> @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ Created /usr/local/Library/Formula/foo.rb</code></pre> </li> <li> <div class="row group button button-large"> - <p><a href="http://wiki.github.com/mxcl/homebrew">Please! Oh please teach me more!</a></p> + <p><a href="http://wiki.github.com/mxcl/homebrew">Please oh please tell me more!</a></p> </div> </li> <li> |