From 0c1ab584d3d0898d47e0bce6beb5d7c39a55dd52 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tom Christie
Date: Mon, 29 Apr 2013 14:08:38 +0100
Subject: Tweaks for preferring .queryset over .model

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 docs/topics/2.3-announcement.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/docs/topics/2.3-announcement.md b/docs/topics/2.3-announcement.md
index e1bcde05..45095582 100644
--- a/docs/topics/2.3-announcement.md
+++ b/docs/topics/2.3-announcement.md
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ Note that the relevant methods have always been private APIs, and the docstrings
 
 ## Explict view attributes
 
-The usage of `model` attribute in generic Views is still supported, but it's usage is being discouraged in favour of using explict `queryset` and `serializer_class` attributes.
+The usage of `model` attribute in generic Views is still supported, but it's usage is being discouraged in favour of the more explict `queryset` attribute.
 
 For example, the following is now the recommended style for using generic views:
 
@@ -146,9 +146,9 @@ For example, the following is now the recommended style for using generic views:
         queryset = MyModel.objects.all()
         serializer_class = MyModelSerializer
 
-Using explict `queryset` and `serializer_class` attributes makes the functioning of the view more clear than using the shortcut `model` attribute.
+Using an explict `queryset` attribute makes the functioning of the view more clear than using the shortcut `model` attribute.
 
-It also makes it the usage of overridden `get_queryset()` or `get_serializer_class()` methods more obvious.
+It also makes the usage of an overridden `get_queryset()` method more obvious.
 
     class AccountListView(generics.RetrieveAPIView):
         serializer_class = MyModelSerializer
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