From e205bd7137fd793d223dbe3e020a628f8e7d98f3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kenneth R. Culp
Date: Fri, 29 Apr 2011 10:04:40 -0700
Subject: Update tutorial docs.

---
 docs/tutorial.step_1.ngdoc | 16 +++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'docs/tutorial.step_1.ngdoc')

diff --git a/docs/tutorial.step_1.ngdoc b/docs/tutorial.step_1.ngdoc
index 02688f2e..7b4613b7 100755
--- a/docs/tutorial.step_1.ngdoc
+++ b/docs/tutorial.step_1.ngdoc
@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@
     <td id="step_result">{@link http://angular.github.com/angular-phonecat/step-1/app Example}</td>
     <td id="tut_home">{@link tutorial Tutorial Home}</td>
     <td id="code_diff">
-{@link https://github.com/angular/angular-phonecat/commit/fa2a351f0ede1666041e407c52e4e5daf448c5f8
-Code Diff}</td>
+{@link https://github.com/angular/angular-phonecat/compare/step-0...step-1 Code Diff}</td>
     <td id="next_step">{@link tutorial.step_2 Next}</td>
   </tr>
 </table>
 
-In this step, we will add basic information about two cell phones.  
+Now that we have the basic ingredients in place, let's add some basic information about two cell
+phones to our app.  
 
 Note: We will usually include only the new code that we added for each step.  In this and
 subsequent examples, we will leave out code from the previous step that hasn't changed, for
@@ -58,18 +58,21 @@ __`app/index.html`:__
 * For those of you playing along at home on your own web servers, did you switch to Step 1 and
 refresh your browsers?  
 
-    * __{@link tutorial_intro Using Git:}__ 
+    * __{@link tutorial Using Git:}__ 
 
         From your `angular-phonecat` directory, run this command:
 
                 git checkout step-1
 
-    * __{@link tutorial_intro Using Snapshots:}__ 
+    * __{@link tutorial Using Snapshots:}__ 
 
         From `[install directory]/sandbox`, run this command:
 
                 ./goto_step.sh 1
 
+* Now would be a good time to open up `app/index.html` in your browser and see the current state
+of our "application". It's not very exciting, but that's ok.
+
 When you're ready, let's move on and start using some angular features to turn this static page
 into a dynamic web app.
 
@@ -79,8 +82,7 @@ into a dynamic web app.
     <td id="step_result">{@link http://angular.github.com/angular-phonecat/step-1/app Example}</td>
     <td id="tut_home">{@link tutorial Tutorial Home}</td>
     <td id="code_diff">
-{@link https://github.com/angular/angular-phonecat/commit/fa2a351f0ede1666041e407c52e4e5daf448c5f8
-Code Diff}</td>
+{@link https://github.com/angular/angular-phonecat/compare/step-0...step-1 Code Diff}</td>
     <td id="next_step">{@link tutorial.step_2 Next}</td>
   </tr>
 </table>
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