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@@ -56,12 +56,12 @@ starting point you can easily change. Angular comes with the following out-of-th
Angular simplifies application development by presenting a higher level of abstraction to the
developer. Like any abstraction, it comes at a cost of flexibility. In other words not every app
is a good fit for Angular. Angular was built for the CRUD application in mind. Luckily CRUD
-applications represent at least 90% of the web applications. But to understand what Angular is
+applications represent the majority of web applications. But to understand what Angular is
good at one also has to understand when an app is not a good fit for Angular.
-Games, and GUI editors are examples of very intensive and tricky DOM manipulation. These kinds of
-apps are different from CRUD apps, and as a result are not a good fit for Angular. In these cases
-using something closer to bare metal such as `jQuery` may be a better fit.
+Games and GUI editors are examples of applications with intensive and tricky DOM manipulation.
+These kinds of apps are different from CRUD apps, and as a result are probably not a good fit for Angular.
+In these cases it may be better to use a library with a lower level of abstraction, such as `jQuery`.
# An Introductory Angular Example
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ expressing business logic.
-Angular frees you from the following pain:
+Angular frees you from the following pains:
* **Registering callbacks:** Registering callbacks clutters your code, making it hard to see the
forest for the trees. Removing common boilerplate code such as callbacks is a good thing. It