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| author | Brian Ford | 2013-08-22 17:39:49 -0700 | 
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| committer | Brian Ford | 2013-08-22 17:40:50 -0700 | 
| commit | bba5214930a8622d0c30fdb8951688bc74dc2d86 (patch) | |
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| diff --git a/docs/content/guide/overview.ngdoc b/docs/content/guide/overview.ngdoc index 8e555bf2..6f51bf7d 100644 --- a/docs/content/guide/overview.ngdoc +++ b/docs/content/guide/overview.ngdoc @@ -56,12 +56,12 @@ starting point you can easily change. Angular comes with the following out-of-th  Angular simplifies application development by presenting a higher level of abstraction to the  developer. Like any abstraction, it comes at a cost of flexibility. In other words not every app  is a good fit for Angular. Angular was built for the CRUD application in mind. Luckily CRUD -applications represent at least 90% of the web applications. But to understand what Angular is +applications represent the majority of web applications. But to understand what Angular is  good at one also has to understand when an app is not a good fit for Angular. -Games, and GUI editors are examples of very intensive and tricky DOM manipulation. These kinds of -apps are different from CRUD apps, and as a result are not a good fit for Angular. In these cases -using something closer to bare metal such as `jQuery` may be a better fit. +Games and GUI editors are examples of applications with intensive and tricky DOM manipulation. +These kinds of apps are different from CRUD apps, and as a result are probably not a good fit for Angular. +In these cases it may be better to use a library with a lower level of abstraction, such as `jQuery`.  # An Introductory Angular Example @@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ expressing business logic. -Angular frees you from the following pain: +Angular frees you from the following pains:    * **Registering callbacks:** Registering callbacks clutters your code, making it hard to see the      forest for the trees. Removing common boilerplate code such as callbacks is a good thing. It | 
